One day, on March 3,2oo9, I woke up early. I found my house was strange. No one there including my parents and my brothers, Lucky and Rizky. I was so confused where they were.
Then, I walked to the kitchen and what happened?. The door was difficult to open. Because I was so hungry, I still tried to open the door by pushing it hardly.
Finally, the door was opened. I was suprised because all of my family members were there and suddenly sang a birthday song together. My mother brought a big cake which there were two candles “number 1 and 7” on its top. Actually, it was my 17th birthday.
Although there was not a big party to celeberate my 17th birthday, I still felt very happy.
Generic Structure
Paragraph 1 : Orientation
Paragraph 2 : Event 1
Paragraph 3 : Event 2
Paragraph 4 : Conclusion
Language Features
Word showing order : then, finally.
Proper noun : March 3, 2009 ; my parents; Lucky and Rizky.
Descriptive words : no one at home, the door of the kitchen was difficult to open, my family sang birthday song, my mother brought a big cake.
BY MUTTAHIDAH
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